I really liked this one. It flowed very well and I like that it was kind of freestyle. Keep up the good work. You have a lot of talent. *5/5*

This is how exactly how I felt before I was going out with my girlfriend. Lovely piece hun. Keep Writing!

--James~

Truth is....
I really like this poem. The flow was great and it was so heartfelt. Hard to tell the truth sometimes right! Great way to get everything out though.

~Juls~

Expressive.. i liked it. u should tell her man she may feel something to u...

Wow man love it and do I feel it the love pain and hurt keep it up 5/5 and thank u for the comment on my poems

Well thats me you hit the nail on the head. Good job you put my thoughts into words

Awesome
5/5
i think ur a very controlled person who doesnt express what u feel i think u shud do so more often...
love
amy

Thanks for the comment, I read your poems, and they're amazing too! Your writing touches my heart!
keep it up! : )

Aw thats cute! Its a really good poem considering how long it is. I really liked it 5/5 =]

- natz x0x

Awee. cute. love it. great writing.

Nice poem...thats kinda what im in right now...the girl i love is in a dilemma between me and some other dude...and no matter what happens..and what she decides..i will still love her with all my heart...and hope for her happiness...great job

Amazing poem. This has good flow, and the wording used was great. I am sure alot can relate to this. good Job!!!

I can really relate to this poem - you captured the feeling expertly, and put a clear image into my mind of your feelings, another awesome poem, keep it up.

Peace. [Sole]

Very emotionaly powerfull. you really lay it all out there, good work

I can relate to a lot of parts in this. It was very well written. It flowed beautifully. There was so much emotion in it. 5/5

I really liked these two stanzas:

Truth is...
I cannot ignore the pain anymore,
When comforting you when you fall.
I cannot stand seeing you being hurt over and over again,
And there's nothing more I can do.

Truth is...
I'm not being truthful and fair to myself,
Cause it hurts so much inside each time you cry.
I cannot leave this wound open,
And not distance myself to let it heal.

I like the whole message of your poem. It's so true, sometimes love and friendship can hurt. I love the ending of your poem, it was perfect.

Great job! 5/5

Good message in this one! the ending in this was perfect! i loved it! lodes of emotion shined through in this one! great job! 5/5

I love your writing, I am really impressed. I feel like maybe you are a little caught between rhyming and not.. and that throws the consistency off a little bit for me..I love it when you are not sticking within the confines and writing freely, those are the lines that have the most impact for me, that say the most.. I think you are very talented and I am looking forward to reading more.

I enjoyed this one..you really express your feelings in this poem..good job!

I really like how the poem ends...
and how every stanza begins...the poem is really well put togetehr! keep up the awesomness!