Nice poem...thats kinda what im in right now...the girl i love is in a dilemma between me and some other dude...and no matter what happens..and what she decides..i will still love her with all my heart...and hope for her happiness...great job
Good message in this one! the ending in this was perfect! i loved it! lodes of emotion shined through in this one! great job! 5/5
14 years ago
I love your writing, I am really impressed. I feel like maybe you are a little caught between rhyming and not.. and that throws the consistency off a little bit for me..I love it when you are not sticking within the confines and writing freely, those are the lines that have the most impact for me, that say the most.. I think you are very talented and I am looking forward to reading more.