Comments : Truth is...

  • 15 years ago

    by Allison

    I really liked this one. It flowed very well and I like that it was kind of freestyle. Keep up the good work. You have a lot of talent. *5/5*

  • 15 years ago

    by James Nguyen

    This is how exactly how I felt before I was going out with my girlfriend. Lovely piece hun. Keep Writing!

    --James~

  • 15 years ago

    by Juls

    Truth is....
    I really like this poem. The flow was great and it was so heartfelt. Hard to tell the truth sometimes right! Great way to get everything out though.

    ~Juls~

  • 15 years ago

    by anna

    Expressive.. i liked it. u should tell her man she may feel something to u...

  • 15 years ago

    by Tammi

    Wow man love it and do I feel it the love pain and hurt keep it up 5/5 and thank u for the comment on my poems

  • 15 years ago

    by Gretchen

    Well thats me you hit the nail on the head. Good job you put my thoughts into words

  • 15 years ago

    by amelia

    Awesome
    5/5
    i think ur a very controlled person who doesnt express what u feel i think u shud do so more often...
    love
    amy

  • 15 years ago

    by BK Butterfly

    Thanks for the comment, I read your poems, and they're amazing too! Your writing touches my heart!
    keep it up! : )

  • 15 years ago

    by Natalie

    Aw thats cute! Its a really good poem considering how long it is. I really liked it 5/5 =]

    - natz x0x

  • 15 years ago

    by Emma

    Awee. cute. love it. great writing.

  • 15 years ago

    by David Marshall

    Nice poem...thats kinda what im in right now...the girl i love is in a dilemma between me and some other dude...and no matter what happens..and what she decides..i will still love her with all my heart...and hope for her happiness...great job

  • 15 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Amazing poem. This has good flow, and the wording used was great. I am sure alot can relate to this. good Job!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Sole

    I can really relate to this poem - you captured the feeling expertly, and put a clear image into my mind of your feelings, another awesome poem, keep it up.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 15 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Very emotionaly powerfull. you really lay it all out there, good work

  • 15 years ago

    by Cayce

    I can relate to a lot of parts in this. It was very well written. It flowed beautifully. There was so much emotion in it. 5/5

    I really liked these two stanzas:

    Truth is...
    I cannot ignore the pain anymore,
    When comforting you when you fall.
    I cannot stand seeing you being hurt over and over again,
    And there's nothing more I can do.

    Truth is...
    I'm not being truthful and fair to myself,
    Cause it hurts so much inside each time you cry.
    I cannot leave this wound open,
    And not distance myself to let it heal.

  • 15 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    I like the whole message of your poem. It's so true, sometimes love and friendship can hurt. I love the ending of your poem, it was perfect.

    Great job! 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Jessica

    Good message in this one! the ending in this was perfect! i loved it! lodes of emotion shined through in this one! great job! 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Cattiebrie

    I love your writing, I am really impressed. I feel like maybe you are a little caught between rhyming and not.. and that throws the consistency off a little bit for me..I love it when you are not sticking within the confines and writing freely, those are the lines that have the most impact for me, that say the most.. I think you are very talented and I am looking forward to reading more.

  • 14 years ago

    by Michelle18

    I enjoyed this one..you really express your feelings in this poem..good job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Delie

    I really like how the poem ends...
    and how every stanza begins...the poem is really well put togetehr! keep up the awesomness!