Broken hearted me

by Kayla   Feb 22, 2006


Left to pick up shattered pieces,
Lying on the floor.
Once was what a beating heart,
Now it is no more.

It suffered bruises, pain and hurt.
But not so you could see.
The pain that lied deep within,
Broken hearted me.

A tortured soul, whose only job,
Was just to fall apart.
A hopeless wonder in the making,
With a shattered heart.

A shadowed figure, hiding now,
So that you cannot see,
The tears of blood that streak the cheeks
Of broken hearted me.

Pick up pieces, one by one.
It\'s now beyond repair.
Never did I find someone,
To ever really care.

So now it's done,
Just leave me here.
Leave me scattered,
In all my fear.

*not sure about the ending...any suggestions would be great...thanks*

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  • 18 years ago

    by swill

    Hey youre in my fav so i saw a new poem so looked it up...and its awesome!!
    umm...the endings pretty good i think...maybe it could flow a little better...but its still fine :D dee
    can ya chek out a few uv my new poems? i miis your comments...they make me smile :)

    bye take care...dhaval

  • 18 years ago

    by AngelEyez89

    Hey hun, great poem though the ending needs a bit more punch into it. its such an amazing idea though 'broken hearted me' LOVE IT.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley

    Awww...that's sad!! Great, but sad. I LOVE YOU KAYLA HUNNY!!! Love ya lots!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by TormentedSoul

    I dunno i though the poem over all that you got so far was really good. i dunno really how i would end it.