Would You Notice?

by NicholasRyan   Feb 23, 2006


He came in with a frown
he didn't even turn around.
no one knew he was down.

he would ware baggy clothes..
to cover up the hidden holes.
people would ask him "why don't you talk"
"why do you always just walk"

they would stare at him..
but they wouldn't dare ask him "what's wrong"
Because they think he's so strong.

his eyes were always red.
they thought it was because he was always high.
but the truth is no one ever notice it was because he always bled.
No one ever knew he shredded a tear.
no on knew that he even had a fear.

no one knew why he wore long sleeve shirts.
they thought it was a curse.
they never thought it could be worse.
all they thought that he was some kind of freak.
but they never dare to think he could be weak..
he tried so hard to sneak.

but one day..
it became to much.
he didn't even had that special touch.

another day came by.
some kid realized.
that that one kid.
was no longer there.
because some one Else came in and said.
that "nick is dead"

:emokid:

Just thinking about I don't know.. Just random stuff.

This is about me, If it were to happened.. later in life.

TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by PnKhOt8

    Hey nick, this is really good!! hang in there tho!! if u ever need anyone to talk to im here u can email me any time kc_0420@hotmail.com i can help if u need anything cause i know what ur going through..hope 2 hear from u

    ByeBye ~Kaci

  • 18 years ago

    by Wolf

    Lovely poem,keep it up

    it has some nice stuff

    but ,(again im not trying to be an ass)

    i think this line was somewhat forced just to go with the rhyme,cuz i dont realy understand it ,maybe if you change it this poem would sound lovelier

    the line
    (Because they think he's so strong)

    Anyways that's just my opinion
    peace out \m/

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Hey this is really good! Great Job! I loved it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ripple

    Thats kwel.. clever coz it makes me fink of sum ppl in my skl n how i notice them now... always take notice of the quite 1's.. thanks 4 commenting on my poem all my love.xxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by xXx Expecting xXx

    I love this poem......

    literally

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