Perfect Nightmare

by AngelEyez89   Feb 24, 2006


Cant you see im dying,
cant you see the tears,
cant you see im living my life,
trapped by so many fears.

cant you see i need you
cant you see im losing the fight
cant you see im exhausted everyday
from crying every night.

cant you notice me
cant you hear me call
cant you see the bruises
from all the constant falls.

cant you see i love you
cant you see i know you dont
cant you see im trying hard
but you just simply wont

cant you see my smiles fake
cant you see im empty inside
cant you see im broken
with no one there to confide

cant you see i need help
cant you see im ill
cant you see my lack of strength
and for living i have no will

cant you see im reaching out
cant you see the pains real
cant you see i crave your love
im losing the good i used to feel

cant you see youre my everything
cant you see i care
cant you see i cant keep living
in this perfect nightmare.

*please comment if you can, thanks so much*

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  • 18 years ago

    by m i s s k a t e l y n

    Omg I

  • 18 years ago

    by Roxy

    WOW!! great job!! this poem is just awsome i love the way it flows and just everything about it!!!
    -:- Lucy-:- i would really appriciate if if u could check some of mine out and comment them if u have the time thankx!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Carrie

    I love this poem.. it's really good... i can relate to it...