I really love this poem! I could read it over and over, it has something so romantic/magical to it, It's totally one of my favourites!

Good poem. i like it. im adding u to my favs. so i know when u have new ones

Really lovely work here well done

Sondos

I loved how you wrapped up this poem! The flow was very nice, it had a rocky beginning at first but as the poem went on everything smoothed out nicely!

This is an amazing poem, I love the wording you have used, great job keep them coming hun sarah x

Great job!! You had excellent flow and rhyming to it .. More towards the end.. You did an excellent job ending it .. it was an all around great poem .. Keep writing!!!

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

What a beautiful poem hun.. I feel like I can really relate. The flow & ryhme-scheme was great! Fantabulous ending ;)..

Awww, thats so sad and sweet, i understand this so well.... another great poem!

Wow! this poem is good! "I have sat with tears in eyes
Thought 'Put an end to all these lies'
Pressed tight to skin, cold, metal knife
Who would care if I took my life?"
absolutely nice lines... emotions are really engraved in the words you wrote... i'm really a critic wen it comes to commenting.. and i can actually say that this is good altho it was short.. good poems makes me crave for more.. u could've made this longer.. =D