Comments : A Very Sad Poem

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Ohhh =(

    This poem gave me chills and it brought a tear to my eye...its so tragic. The sad thing is, that this stuff really happens...ugh. Keep up the beautiful writing hun

  • 18 years ago

    by my_little_secret

    There are a lot of poems ive heard like this so i cant really say its like, different, but the way that you wrote it was sensitive and you dealt with the issues in a way that gave them justice. My friend was killed because of a drunk driver and ithink you handled it well xx

  • 17 years ago

    by sarah

    Fantastic job, keep them coming take care sarah x

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow.. that was very very good! i lovedd itt! it was so sad.. but at least they all died together.. it would have been awful if lik only one survived.. neways, there were just a few grammar mistakes..keep up the good work!
    jessy

  • 17 years ago

    by ALEXIS

    This poem is sooo amazing!
    i cant imagine what this situation would ever be like, but ur description of it gave me shivers and reduced me to tears- thankyou i loved every line! al.