Ohhh =(

This poem gave me chills and it brought a tear to my eye...its so tragic. The sad thing is, that this stuff really happens...ugh. Keep up the beautiful writing hun

There are a lot of poems ive heard like this so i cant really say its like, different, but the way that you wrote it was sensitive and you dealt with the issues in a way that gave them justice. My friend was killed because of a drunk driver and ithink you handled it well xx

Fantastic job, keep them coming take care sarah x

Wow.. that was very very good! i lovedd itt! it was so sad.. but at least they all died together.. it would have been awful if lik only one survived.. neways, there were just a few grammar mistakes..keep up the good work!
jessy

This poem is sooo amazing!
i cant imagine what this situation would ever be like, but ur description of it gave me shivers and reduced me to tears- thankyou i loved every line! al.