My patience in death is unending, as it was not in life.''

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I leave you this last gift...Hope

Really powerful imagery. And those lines rule. Hope is what most of us live on. Awesome poem.

Lv A, x

Wow i love this, its just so powerful and reads so beautifully, good work:)xxx

Wow... this poem is so pretty and perfect. Absolutely flawless. You've really got a way with words...keep up the awesome writing, kay?!

Sad Maiden asks you to stay. Thee ocean, oh beauty she, can be admired from afar. Again let us dance in the snow on ocean shore. Not goodbye to Naerwen, but a welcoming to our new dance, Our dance with ocean waves. May we both dress in white and finally belong. Beautiful.

This is a really powerful bit or writing, it was written perfectly to set the imagery and mood of the poem, great write

Wow this is really good!

Mallori

Yeah Violet! Very well done!!! I love it! It is so dark and beautiful, I love ur choice of words, and the flow, its just deep feeling, and kinda sucked me in, I just felt inspired, and in a sense of darkness! It was just so well writtin! And flowed so well! Great job!=D total 5!!!

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