Untitled (The worst poem ever)

by Ike Dizzle   Feb 25, 2006


(This poem sucks trying to save you some time)

From the first time I saw you
It seems as if you stole my soul
As my mind travels to the beach
And take a stroll
My heart fighting
To balance off emotions
And my stomach feels as
If it was on a thousand oceans
My mouth waters
Every time I think of you
With you are in my sight
I will never fill blue
You are a beautiful girl
That money could not buy
And this why
I love you, Tri.

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  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Nope, not at all.. Jus tryna express it or just trying think of it.. The way u write, the way u think isn't such horrible poem. This is sweet.. Heh

  • 17 years ago

    by Delie

    It's not horrible.
    gosh what are you thinking?
    kay i've seen you write better.
    but this is so cute.
    good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by {get*lost}

    If you think that was the worst poem ever, you should really read more lol it was such a good poem... xoxo kt

  • 17 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    That was a good poem...all the oceans and beaches scheme was kool...i liked it even if u dont...thx for ur comments,
    love ya lots,
    sore

  • 18 years ago

    by lonelynow

    Wow if that is your worst poem please PM me and tell me which is your best!!

    Maybe not the best poem I've ever read, but certainly not the worst. It was very heartfelt and emotional and good. You can tell from that poem that you do have talent, even if you haven't shown it very well here.

    Wait, wait, I'm going to write the worst poem ever:

    dear vino
    you look like a casino
    nothing rhymes with vino
    is this even your PnQ name?
    it would be a shame
    if i checked and it was not
    some people like to eat snot

    yeh..that was pretty bad ;)

    so yeh..gonna go check out some more of your stuff.

    sorry for the randomest comment ever!

    lonelynow xxxxxxx

    p.s. is it just a tactic to get people to r/r/c???
    smart guy x