His Death 2-9-06

by Amanda Clayburn   Feb 25, 2006


She came home that night
Holding her pillow tight
Wishing you would be all right
Your boyfriend just lost his life
Ripping his wrist from a knife
Blood seeping onto the floor
Your mother knocks on the door
Honey what's wrong?
Mama I'm not strong
Why are there tears on your face?
Please mama I have already lost my grace
I let the raindrops become my tears
She said baby tell me all of you r fears
I couldn't repeat his death
My baby what did he said?
I looked at her making no eye
How could I tell her me boyfriend just died
She laid her hand on my knee
Then I started to speak
She couldn't believe
Why he gave up and leave?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Daniel R Rodriguez is the star of my eye i love him so much

    It s cool i like it i jjust lost someone 2 that

  • 17 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    I really liked your poem, very beautifully written although in this line:
    "Why he gave up and leave?"
    i think you mean:
    "Why did he gave up and leave?"
    just thought i'd tell you.. cause it sounds better like that..
    your poem had a very great flow..
    keep up the great work..
    take care..
    luv,,
    haya 3gab =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Esther

    Aw that's so sad n i like it don't undertand why u wouldn'y want that on your wall!

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