I loved the style of this poem. it was very diffrent, but a joy to read great. job.
Emma 5/5

Very interesting style of writing, I love it keep up the good work!

-Josiah

Excellent
5/5
i've no other words to say how good it is !
love
amy

Ur poems r so complex, but i love them!!! oh question, i was goin to read "Dinner id Served" but when i clicked on it the page told me that it doesn't exsist...??? what's up with that? oh well. 5/5 on this one. great job.

Different...but hey, if everything were the same, nothing would be interesting right? Love it.

Another unique poem :) Levaes gaps for the reader to fill in - I'd love to know what inspired you to write this :)

Peace. [Sole]

Very interesting way of writting, I love it. Awesome Job. keep up the amazing work.

~Joe~

Its hard for me to see this as a love poem, but theres something about it that i like... just cant figure out what lol

I love your use of words!! It flowed really nicely. The style was very unique, which is great! I enjoyed reading it! Keep up the good writting. You are very talented!

A very unique write yet again! Your poetry is a breath of fresh air, and the title really caught my eye! I loved the format you choose and the wording was nicly choosen! In a few places the flow of the whole stanza was kind of lost, read your poem out load a couple times and mark all the places where you find it hard to say, or a bit off color! Or better yet hand it to somone else to read and take notes on where their voices go off from the flow! I Hope this helps... Excellent job my friend!

Well your choice of words is really unique and they are all right - the poems really interesting and it makes you want to read right until the end. This one i read twice as i found it hard to take in the first time. maybe i'm just tired as it is 10.45pm. Haha! Amanda :)

UNiqe poetry which did give off the feeling of being lost in a city not knowing where you started or where you'll end up. It seemed right with the sudden short one worded sentences to the more longer ones, which is hard to pull off, yet you did that well with no force.

Very unique! loved it! good choice of words and nice descriptions! 5/5

Aww.. you really are in love arnt you? dont worry.. it'll all work itself out.. another poem filled with emotion.. love your work! 5/5

You described everything in this poem so very well... I could picture it all in my mind. I love this poem, you did such a great job on this, and the way that you ended it was perfect. great job!!!

Yumm...i love it
i usually dont like poems that dont rhyme
but this ones an exception
:)

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Yumm...i love it
i usually dont like poems that dont rhyme
but this ones an exception
:)

ps.[comment mine?]

Good poem..i like it.....keep it up!

Excellent!

Oh my gosh.. i love this poem.. with a minumim of words its still really strong.. great job!!