My Blade So Real

by m i s s k a t e l y n   Feb 28, 2006


The scars I have
I have to hide because
If you knew you would cry
as I do every night

I hurt myself then
cry myself to sleep
listening to the music
the cd that makes my pain

seem important
the music at the volume of
12 makes me want to get
help

my friends think
I should stop
because they don't get it
my pain already enough

the blade of the razor
makes me feel strong
like nothing is wrong
like the only pain I feel

Is the pain I create
when I move the blade
down my arm then I cry
for hours with no stop

the bleeding will
soon stop but then
I will start it again
until I finally make my end.

~Let me know what you think
the pain is real and so are these words so think about that when commenting~

~Katie a Broken Heart~

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  • 16 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    I cut myself for a while but I am over that. SO DONE. Everyone asks why I did it and I tell them 'Because I wanted to then. I don't now so get over it.' I don't blame anyone for cutting. I only blame them for continuing.

  • 16 years ago

    by reborn

    The second part of the poem is better. when u start talking about the blade. i sure hope it's fictional cuz nothing on this earth should give u the desire to end ur life. cuz there are ups and downs in this life. n ur still so young so 4 sure u'll have better moments that are worth living 4. however that passage was really deep n dark n sad. so the emotions provoked are really good. as a sad poem should create. 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    Awesome poem it was very deep! I loved the way you wrote it! it was really cool. Keep it up! ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by if i told it wouldnt be a secret

    That was such a good poem ever need some one to talk to im here for you
    *dee@dee*

  • 18 years ago

    by SexyBabe101

    This poem is really good...I can relate to it all also.
    Thanks for your comment on one of my poems, same goes for you, if you need someone to talk to i'm here.
    Reagards Laura

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