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Well written, once again.
Peace, love and empathy,
Vladimira Rose

I woke up this morning
Realizing it was all a dream
I think it is so amazing
How real dreams can seem
The truth really is
That I am too scared to tell
I have been living with this nightmare
And it all leads to pure hell

These lines really caught my attention.
They lead the poem well and hte sadness is compounded in the final lines.
Well written.

I have been living with this nightmare
And it all leads to pure hell

I liked those lines, particularly because "pure hell" caught my eye. There was a sadness that flowed through, and anger and despair that came from the simple words that you used.
I hope that this story is not true, but if it is, perhaps the best thing for you to do is share it with people, and not bear this burden alone.

Anyway, if it's not true, then as it is, the poem came out beautifully!

Good Writing,

//T.L.//

I want to feel normal
I don't want to grow up this way
^This is something I keep thinking to myself and I wish people would understand that. I think you should describe more what it feels like to be a victim and scared instead of plain out telling us. People need to know how truley bad things can be. I have people who just tell me I overreact to something that, "Was bad but not that bad."

Have faith :) Your poetry is excellent, and what a shame if the world could never read it. 5/5

Peace. [Sole]