Help me...

by Blah.   Mar 1, 2006


I try to smile,
Try to hide my fears,
Make you think Iâ??m fine with life.
But deep inside Iâ??m not ,Iâ??m dieing
My life is being ripped apart little by little,
By forces unseen, I pray to God to help me
But he doesnâ??t hear my plea, Iâ??m dieing
And you donâ??t even know, donâ??t even see,
The pain I hide within this beating heart.
I try to find help, look for a listening ear
But all are gone or turned away.
Help me see the good side
Away from this never ending blackness.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sempiternal

    Very good writing Anne, returning the comment you made for me...Remember though..there is light at the end of the dark blackness and you are only dying inside when life decides to take you with it...For now breathe the air you do and appreciate it for what it is cuz we all someday end up trying to gasp for what it is we take advantage of...Nice poem...Very deep and very unique..

  • 18 years ago

    by amber

    Thanks for the comment on mine. . i'm sorry to hear about your bf. . .sometimes things work out for the better and sometimes things don't work out at all. Just in the mean time don't dwell on it and try to get back into hangin out with your friends and stuff. . .don't hate him but don't love him neither. . two of the hardest things to do after a break up. . .thanks again
    w/b
    ~*~Amber~*~

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