This is extremely good...xoxo
elissa

comment back if ud like

EXCELLENT.

I adore the imagery here such power in your writing. Wonderful Work yet again

Sondos

Very well written and sad.

Wow... great write! It's so sad, powerful and emotional. Keep up the great work! 5/5

Wow Mikochan...this is amazing. I'm really speechless. I love it.

I loved the way u constructed your sentences...i know ppl who do drugs...serious drugs too...ive tried so hard to get them to stop..but its useless..ppl need to realize all they do is make ur life miserable...any way great poem..5/5

Take care
David

Really awesome poem tainted.
One of the best from u so far..so it's really up there:P
i love the way you moulded the two stories into one along with comparision..it was extremely effective for us to watch an innocent girl with harmless dreams turn to something as rewarding yet more demanding and hurtful.
You are a very skilled writer and i truly look up to u.
Ive missed u hun..
hope u r ok *HUGS*
luv always
>torn

More ppl should read this. I can certainly see what your saying here. good work , and as for u, let u be an inspiration to others

Your right drugs are addicting no matter the person and what they might say
I hope everyone reads this poem and takes the message to heart!
It was an amazing piece I really liked it. Great job!
But you had some misspellings i'de point them out but i'de have to go back. but then i'de have to start my comment all over LoL.

Nice. I loved it.

Tainted

Wow, This poem has such... I don't know how to describe it. This is truest talent I have seen in ages! Tainted, this is ..Wow.. I really hate myself for not having a larger vocabulary at the moment... Your words hold truth and passion, and that sense of longing to have the simple childhood back, the innocence we all loose. Your diction astounds me, the language is truly spectacular and I hate that My comments all gushy but… this poem is something I can really relate to, especially with what my friends are going through at the moment. I could sit here for hours looking for something wrong but I really feel you’ve nailed this. Well done (Your on my Favie’s now =) )

So I’ll reply to your comment now:

Every word you left me with is true, I know the future is what I should focus on, the poem wasn't written with thought, just emotion. I wanted to get across that hopeless loneliness I know way too many feel. And wondered if I could possibly find out my reasons for being here at this time and place through it, you know? I have promises and bonds that hold me to this world, and my writing is what keeps me from doing something stupid. My friends are my safety net =)

Thankyou kindly for your comment, and your advice I will be working on this poem =)
The Silence
Aka, Jenn

Very powerful message and a well-written poem as well. I'm looking forward to reading more of your poems. Thanks for the insight.

Plz vote/comment on my poems.
Thanks and great work!

*Kelly*

Thanks for your comments on Mythos :). I've read some of your poems before and I remember being..just happy to find such a very intense writer. I believe poems should be more about expressing emotion or personal situations and you do that. Also the way you do it, with very creative rhyming and storyline really affects the entire poem. Personally I've never been involved with drugs, but other things like cutting and other people who do those things have been around so I understand the addiction and the control aspect of people around. Really great work 5/5

Mixing drugs or depression or self harm with fantasys and fairytales sound really amazing, liek this poem. 5/5. i hope things clear up for you and your friend

Nice poem, it's a good metaphor with the princess and stuff. Nice rhymes and a good message. 5/5.

-DJ

Loved this poem , conveys such strong message for young lives trapped in drugs.The way u compare the innocence of childhood with present drug addiction is really praiseworthy.
Great poem simply loved it.

Thanks for ur sweet comment ,really appreaciate it.

Take care
chavii.

Hey i really like this. i really like the metaphor of the princess business. and i like the words you use. and this is a major compliment from me cuz i usually hate poems like this. awesome job!

Wow I thought this was absolutely amazing. You really have a great way with words, and a true unique talent. The poem touched me so much because sadly at one point in my life I could relate to the princess. It brought a tear to my eye, and got me thinking how thankful I am that I am no longer mixed up in that life. Keep up your wonderful work! 5/5

Wow, that so sad im sorry to hear about your friends. the poem was so good. the words and the rhymes. great!
your vocabulary is simply amazing. i loved how you related it to that princess and how everything changed..