Your lonely daughters plea

by Becky   Mar 3, 2006


I Know that I brake things
you say this is unacceptable
but what you don't realize
is what your other children are breaking

not something materialistic
not something you can put a price to
but something you can't get back once it's gone
something you fail to see

they are breaking me mommy
why don't you see?!
can't you see the pain in my eyes
can't you see the marks on my body
don't you hear the words they say
don't you hear my heart breaking at night,
as I cry myself to sleep

please mommy help me up
for I am falling mommy
why can't you tell
take a look in my eyes
don't you see the hurt behind,
that haunted girl that looks back at you
that's me mommy, that's me!
please help me
the monsters are coming

mommy it's too late now
everything is dark
I'm sorry you didn't see mommy
too bad this had to be

but the monsters got me
they slipped right past you
in a clever disguise
they posed as your other children
the good three

I know you hated me
but I also know you loved me mommy
you were just to blind to see

now that I'm gone mommy
now that you've read this note
maybe you'll finally know
I wasn't the only one breaking things mommy
all along they were breaking me too
slowly killing me inside

but it's OK mommy
even though now I'm gone
and you didn't save me
I always loved you mommy
and even though I'm not there
I still do

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  • 17 years ago

    by X2892

    Another great poem 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by unnoticedXlove

    OMG becky i love this one... it kinda made me wanna cry tho

    LOVE YOU

  • 17 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    This is really nice. Theres some rough patches, but I really like the theme. Not to be mean but I think that you tried to write "break" not "brake" in the first stanza

    [PygmyPuff]

  • 17 years ago

    by NicholasRyan

    Hey its me nick I changed my name again, You never talk to me any more.. ;-( well ttyl please takl to me..i miss talking to you later nick

  • 17 years ago

    by NicholasRyan

    Hey you what is up..I havnt see you or talked you and i am kind of worrried..wel yeha later nick.?