Love bites. This is a great poem. Very reflective of the feelings and things experienced when relationships end. Beautifully done.

This is so sad!
"My spirit lifted when we kissed
and flew to you on the wings of air."
^^^ These lines are beautiful! Wonderfully written and heartfelt, great job!

I loved this poem...a great write
ashly

Beautiful, just beautiful, loved it

all the best and take care

Another awesome poem, well done.
You are a good poet.
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Nicely done, great wrire Cuddles!!!

Cuddles wut a lovely and light poem and i loved esp My spirit lifted when we kissed
and flew to you on the wings of air

Good always

What an astonishing poem Mary.
Superb!!! No other words to describe it.

Love
Michelle

Truly heartfelt....

My favorite part was:

I imagined us sitting on the bench.
I could feel our fingers entwined.
I saw the moonlight play across your face.
I felt your heart reach out to mine.

Those lines were truly touching. I have felt this way as I assume many others have as well and it is always nice to know that it is a natural feeling to long something or someone we cannot have. Awesome job!!! I luved it.

This is a gorgeous poem darling, very well written.
=] i'm impressed

Great poem. Absolutely amazing. Heart wrenching at the same time. I loved it.

Loved the poem, really amazing imagery, and truly heartfelt. 5/5
Helen

Really good poem got my 5 vote keep writing take care sarah x

G0d i no exactly h0w y0o feel :(:( i wish it wasnt a dream :'(....iff u need someone 2 talk 2 ill b ther...luv l0tz maddy xxx

That was really nice

Good one Mary - very sad and beautifully flowing thru and thru.

great job

love and peace
shobhana

That was so sad
i loved it 5/5 XxX

Oh!!! My, Lucky is the guy that wins
your heart Mary. 18 years old and you
write like a master. You put goose bumps
up and down my spin with this poem.
It is great to read such captivating poetry
Write On,
Bogie