Just me

by & i still ♥ him   Mar 3, 2006


[my first attempt at modern poetry... which is not ryhming... i was told]

the smell of the rain
relaxed the pain in me
it felt like living again
with the sunshine finding its way out

the rain still drizzled onto my face
closing my eyes to enjoy each drop
the clouds drew back
with the light shining high

couldn't help but think its was beautiful
like when we were in love
smiling for just the thought of you
was just simply good enough

but now its only me
along with the sun and the rain
but at night
the stars take your place
although it can never be the same

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  • 18 years ago

    by MiSZ ALAiNA

    Omfg..i know...im never on here anymore...i have so many poems to submit though..lolZ...what's up..i loved this...reminded me of lante

  • 18 years ago

    by Valeria

    Omgsh.. GREAT WAY to express ur self..GOOD JOB..! keep it up girl...im sorry if u feel this way...i hope everything gets better in ur life..! keep ur head up no matter waht..! love yah girl..know that their is always someone taht cares for u..! if u need help or advice just e-mail me..anytimes..