Complete Emptiness

by JussxAxNobody   Mar 4, 2006


I wake up in the morning, and see an empty space.
What was formerly present, nothing can replace.
Unless I get her back, forever empty shall I stay.
Days come and go, nothing is the same.
I pushed her away, just like all the others.

*Needs More Work*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany Paige

    No suggestions its perfect the way it is cuz its wat u really feel.
    i like it...
    hope to read from ya soon.
    ~lots of love~
    ByE

  • 17 years ago

    by facedownindirt

    Hey!

    Andrew I don't think it needs any work. I like it the way it is!

    You really have become a talented writer and I think your getting better and better from the first poem you showed me.

    Good Job! =]

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