by Hurtingsoul Mar 4, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
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A bit long ...sorry.... |
by kimberley
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I really like that so very much |
by gack60
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A really nice piece, the description of a kiss; that makes a nice poem, i loved the detail used and the similies you used to compare the feelings. |
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Really nice poem. I like how you described the kiss into bits of details. Great job. |
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Really nice poem. I like how you described the kiss into bits of details. Great job. |
by Blissful
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This was a dream? I bet you woke up with a smile on your face :] |