Hey darl beautifully written. great j0b!!

Magnificent! Amazing, loving write! A divine poem Darien, truly wonderful!

It's so cute! The whole shy guy thing kind of gets to me. It's adorable. Divinely lovely write!

I love this poem. so meaningful and just beautiful. was it based on anything you've been through? anyway it was beautiful.

This was a great poem. I really like the way it was introduced, and from there it stayed with strong rhymes and a strong poem. I'm sure whoever it's for would like it. (If it's for someone)

The rain has stopped,
as the sun peaks through.
A rainbow can be seen,
but baby I'm looking at you.

That seems to be the best ending I have ever read out of any poem so far.

Wow this is a really cute poem good job! :]

That was so sweet...whom ever this was about must be very special...great poem...

Innocent Crybaby*

Hey this is a very good poem. i like how u write. good job

Great work, Darien!

a nice simple idea done into a great story.

good luck and peace
shobhana

This is so sweet, I love it.

Oh my goodness this is amazing... i love it ♥

DANG! this is a good poem boy who ever ur girl is should be happy she got a poet has a bf and a poem thats so lovely dedicated to her :) (check out my poem love is...)

THis is really good and very sweet.

AWWWW,Not only do you have a dark side you have a sweet side too.Can't beat that...lol Very sweet meaning behind this poem.
Tisha~

Heyy this is a cute poem. good job. i like how u write

Very sweet and precious...... young love...... great rhyme and flow. Beautifully written.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela (mom)

I frame a picture i took with my mind! that was a great line, great conecpt = great poem
if you have the chance, please check out my poem impulse
- Words are only treasured when they are truely spoken

Aw that is such a sweet poem. I loved it from beginning to end. You described everything so beautifully and I love the last line of it.. It was so sweet and absolutely adorable. You did such a great job on this! I loved it!

Wow! once again -speechless- it was wonderful, i loved it! i really can say that my stomach is swirling around like crazy, i wish i had somebody out there who would write poems like this about me!

**meggie**

Thats so sweet! You express your love in words in such a way that it leaves your reader feeling as though they're in love as well! Excellent write, it got better and better with every word!