by Laura Mar 7, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Did you think you could walk in and out of my life whenever you want? |
by Fallen~Tears
Great job.. And good for you!!.. Everything flowed nicely and it showed great strength and hope keep it up 5/5 |
by Kaylee
Moving hard is one of the hardest things for me to have done, and you expressed really great an image of growing strength and hope. Don't let those who hurt you keep you down. |
by Simon Hayes
Wonderful writing!! Hope shining through in this poem... You should never go back once you've moved on. Really enjoyed this one, it flowed quite nicely I thought :) |