What do you see?

by ღMőŁŀŷ ĹůvÅ¡ Ũღ   Mar 7, 2006


What do you see when you look in her eyes? Do you see courage, hope, pride?

Do you see the pain shes silently hiding? Do you see a heartache shes silently fighting?

Do you see how lonely she is cause of the turned backs? Do you see the hope and courage she lacks?

can you tell the smile on her face is fake? Do you see whats wrong, do you see the mistake?

Do you know how much help it would take, for this girl to ever be the same?

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  • 18 years ago

    by ღMőŁŀŷ Ĺůvš Ũღ

    Lol thanks! i wonder how that happened lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Nicely written...from the heart.

    This stanza:

    Do you see the pain shes silently hiding? Do you see a heartache shes silently fighting?

    Try this for flow:

    Do you see the pain she silently hides? Can you feel the heartache she is silently fighting?

    Your last sentence appears to be missing an "r" in ever.

    Your style is awesome! Keep writing.

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