The girl next door.

by aga   Mar 8, 2006


"She smiles like a child,
with flowers in her hair,
with blood on her hands,
into the sun she stares."

She has lost her way,
just like all the roses died, in the bouquet,
She now sheds blood,
while walking through a pile of mud.

She stares at the sun,
and tries giving up,
but she knows, that giving up,
is like dieing.

Now she sheds tears,
through these past years,
"we" hope she gets better through these years,
but we doubt it because we only see tears.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Micky

    Kool

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    by Micky

    Awsome 5/5

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    by maya

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  • 18 years ago

    by Dreaming_Awake

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  • 18 years ago

    by ღHazel_Kittenღ

    This is a really good poem and I look forward to reading more, It flows and has a sence of rhytm. Good Job
    ~.~ Mia ~.~