When you walk by

by Emma   Mar 8, 2006


Never once felt your touch
look into your eyes
but when you walked by
my world lights up, my tears
wiped away,
Fears are taken away,
all because you walked by.
One day
Finally felt your touch
looked into your eyes
When you walked by
it was beautiful
a long embrace, a long kiss,
and dark brown eyes.
All because you walked by.
The next day
i didn't touch you or see your eyes,
when you walked by
you blow me off
I fell and broke
All because you walked by.

**i don't know i wrote this down during Chemistry so i don't know if it is all there.

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  • 18 years ago

    by hezha murad

    Wow,, great peoms,, u can write..i love this poem, decribes me kindof.

  • 18 years ago

    by azlan26

    'fears are taken away' great line
    it feel right when they are there - and sometimes wrong . . .
    great poem again :)
    Keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by Unforgiven Retniap doolb

    It cam out nicely....organization was o.k. you might want to work on the ending a little bit but yeah thats just my opinion..and pretty good emotion imagery in some parts

  • 18 years ago

    by PoeticLoserface

    Wow! that's good!