Reality

by Taylor   Mar 9, 2006


Only knowing what is right
I try to fight the truth away
what i did was surely wrong
and soon enough my heart will pay
hidden guilt my mind bestows
secrets i shall not display
hoping that my hearts not found
for now in darkness it shall stay

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  • 18 years ago

    by Danielle

    I like it.. try to do longer next time... but i like how u write.. and how u put ur heart and soul into it.. put more emotion!! but great job... 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Hmm, this is a well written poem, you have a good use of vocab. Its short, too the point with a touch or mystery. I like it. The onlt thing i would suggest it that you add punctuation. It'll help the reader understand you poem better. Other then that nice, keep it up!
    ~Luvz~
    ~Angie~
    xoxo