Swore...

by aga   Mar 10, 2006


You Swore...
We would last forever,
But look at us now,
we're a broken vow.

You Swore...
But it didn't last so long,
we were all wrong,
We just don't belong,
we weren't so strong.

You lied....
You said we would be together forever,
but you weren't so clever,
however,
we had some good times,
but most of the times, it was just bad rhymes.

The love i once,
had for you,
is up in smoke,
we were just a broken joke.

Now heres a question:
Was it wrong to love you,
that you "had" to hurt me,
so bad?

Now that we're gone,
i shall only see you at the break of dawn.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Micky

    Kool

  • 19 years ago

    by The Wingless

    Hmm, interesting topic, it's a little over-used, but none the less, it's an interesting topic.

    I think you need to capitalize the letter, "I" in the word, "I". The ending isn't the best..and I'm going to be honest, the imagery is a little weak. Great poem though, keep up the good work.

  • 19 years ago

    by LuvMeAlwayz

    I like it, it's a good poem

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