Wow that is a really deep and thoughtfull poem, keep writing!!

Oh My God its a great poem 5/5. I do think you should fix the typos. Its great, Oh did I tell you its great. LOL....

Wow, thats intense. Great work I enjoyed reading it. The flow of this poem is great, it really got my attention. Sorry if this really happened to you.
Juls

God.. I really don't know what to say. It's such a sad poem. It's so emotional. I can really tell you gave this poem your all. So many feelings in this, so much pain.

It's very nice written. But I feel so bad when I say that, cause .. dam.. I'm sorry I don't know what to say..

Blah.. sorry.. speechless...

Glad you shared your feelings with us..

Lotsaaaaaaaa love
-xxx-

It's really deep and emotional *and shows us how society has been going up and downhill* with fantastic organization. Some of the line sran a bit long but they still were alright. You might want to check some of your tenses. Other than that, it really is a sad poem that had my complete attention while reading it.

Wow, amazing Job. I loved it. This is a very emotional poem. great Job!

Omg this is is so touching... it pretty much brung tears to my eyes.. and i know its a hard concept to over come!

Great poem, flowed, made more sense then must things I write. I want to yell at my brother for looking over my shoulder and reading Latasha's comment in a ioitic voice. This poem seems to demand greater respect. It tells a story, and well. It's good to hear of some ones servival through a horrible hell.

An excellent poem indeed. You have really brought the story of your past to life in this poem; making it atmospherically enjoyable- but emotionally heart breaking.Overall, great job.

Much love and God bless,
Fallen.

This is really deep. it flows all well together. its really sad but you captured it really well.

Kat

WOW! Man that's so deep!! I'm so truly sorry if this really happened to you! I do agree with L.S. Moore though. You do need to work on those mistakes, but other than that, it's a great poem. Sad too!! Keep writing. I give you top ratings on this poem.

Take care cause I care!! You'll be in my prayers!!

Marissa

Wow..I am left..Like SPEACHLESS..it was soo good..it brought tears to my eyes. Wonderful job..top rating defeniatly..

Deep what other word can say it.. that is so strong.. you must have had it hard but it seems like you love your dad best of wishes!
-Rachel 5/5

Great work again... really nice!

That's really sad. A good poem though. Just really sad, I enjoyed it. Great Job.

Wow thats a powerful poem...but its real good but real sad...

Really sad, but beautifully epressed, full of heartfelt emotion. Another 5/5

Like the other you put tears in my eyes. I'm sorry your father was this way. He doesn't deserve to be a father. Keep your head up. Keep writing because sometimes that is the only thing that will help