Tell me

by aga   Mar 11, 2006


Tell me why i lost you,
Tell me why you lied,
Tell me you loved me,
or at least the you tried.

These tears keep falling,
i can not undo what can never be undone
So i take this gun,
Stick it in my head and think:

You've got me this far,
you've made me bleed,which left a scar,
i cant be alone,
but I've been blown.

You broke up with me,
that probably made you feel free,
so i pull the trigger,
make it end.

You find me lying on the floor,
blood on every door,
You cry and yell,
and with this body i say farewell.

For once this love ended,
i got offended
i couldn't take it anymore,
because of what you only did was make war.

You look at me,
when I'm done and dead on my knee
Your holding my blood,
and kick mud.

You also took the gun
and you knew it cant be undone,
you did the same,
and you pulled the trigger without any shame.

why...tell me why...

(this ending was given by The Wingless, check her poems out they rock)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Micky

    Great job aga!!!!!!!!

    love
    micky

  • 18 years ago

    by Micky

    Kool

  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Now this one is really goood. I loved it... great job!!!

    ::MELI::

  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    I like this poem. I rated it a 5, but I think there are some things that need to be changed. You ended a little weak, I think it could be a little bit better.

    And also, the tell me why...tell me why... thing would od great for a repetitive effect, I think you should add it again somewhere.
    Great job, awesome flow.