Let there be love

by Biscuit   Mar 11, 2006


All around me is love;
the sun in the sky,
casting an all-seeing eye
on the world,
accentuating the beauty of the flowers, the grass, the midsummer calm.

Bouncing on the water,
the sun crystallizes the river,
bringing love to life within it
and upon it.

A cool breeze wanders lazily around,
rippling the water,
rustling the trees;
everything loves and is loved in return.

You are my sun; all the beauty in me was created by you.

Laying side by side
with our fingers entwined,
we compliment each other perfectly. Blissfully.
Sculpting each other we become one,
and yet this is not
because we want each other but because
we were meant to be together
I was made for you, and you for me,
like the stars for the sky.

The whole world was made by,
and for love, but of all
the love that surrounds us,
there is nothing greater than my love for you and
I desire nothing more than your love for me.
For what is love if it is not mutual?
What do we live for if not for love?

I live for you. I share
every breath, every thought, every heartbeat
with you.
You are the cause of every smile, every laugh,
all the happiness inside me.

When I look into your eyes I see all
the stars in the universe twinkling back at me, and
your smile is the sun; so
comforting and warm, the centre of everything,
the most important and beautiful thing in the world

(age 16)

*another one for you, scott

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  • 17 years ago

    by FlirtingWithDeath

    Mmmmm I think my favorite stanza is "Bouncing on the water,
    the sun crystallizes the river,
    bringing love to life within it
    and upon it."

    Great job =] 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Ohh. I like this. It was really nicely done. Great way to put how you feel into a poem. Lovely. :]

  • 17 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    Very well expressed...i really liked the wording and how all the words were just so beautiful when you put them together. I could feel the emotion pouring out of the screen, thats how emotional it was...Great Write!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Cute poem... Your form of writing is really odd to me; you just don't seem to have one. Maybe if you did your flow would be smoother... It's a bit rocky to me. Other than that I loved it.. The way you described everything.. Great job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    I really like this poem.

    Bouncing on the water,
    the sun crystallizes the river,
    bringing love to life within it
    and upon it.

    I really liked this part, the way it is written, its just wonderful.