Awwwwwww.........this should be a love poem...not dark...although it is sad.

Sweetie!!! i went to bed on Friday and surely enough wat did i dream about??? what you said I was going to dream about!!! lol love you!!!! tty soon!!!
Amanda

Sad and well done for being short. Quite good actually. An interesting piece. I strongly favor the middle stanza.
~Faith

I also strongly favor the middle stanza... It made me shiver, Nick. Amazing work.

5/5

Car

That was amazing! Nice job. I just don't know how you can write so well. Keep doing what you do nick!

THis is really good!! Nice...keep up the good writings.

Wonderful use of writing...i love it!

5/5