The Feeling

by Alexx   Mar 13, 2006


The blade is sharp against my wrist,
All it needs is a little twist,
The blood will flow all over me,
Whats the use, I'll never be free,
Stuck inside a world i hate,
I try so hard to brake through the gate,
All i think about is you,
But i still cant help feeling blue,
Only you can help me through this illness,
But you dont see, you dont notice,
The feeling is strong,
And it feels so wrong,
Tell me your next to me in this fight,
Tell me everything is goin to be alright,
Tell me you love me in every single way,
Tell me Your going to be there every single day,
I just need to hear those words from you,
Maybe then i'll stop feeling blue

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  • 17 years ago

    by SweetDreamz

    Omg...dude your making me cry..seriously i love the emotion

  • 18 years ago

    by Rebecca

    That one was good to. i'm quite surprised your only 12 wow

  • 18 years ago

    by Alexx

    Thanx guys :) u make me feel a little batta :P

  • 18 years ago

    by .::BrokenHrt::.

    Hey wow gr8 writing...i hope ur ok??? if u eva need to talkk or nefink i no wat u feel like...gr8 poem 5/5 xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Simply Complex

    Wow!! great job!! i Liked it...i write some stuff like this too..read ns comment mine if you dont mind! ~5/5~
    Justagirl~Mel