Comments : Without You

  • 14 years ago

    by katherine

    You're a reallyyyy good writer.
    keep it up. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    I just love the feelings i get after reading ur poems, infact i love everything abt ur poem and everything that is related to it. i can sense a communication here between two great hearts & i wish them all the best.

    lovely poem and i hope u two meet soon, as i am sure that after that there will be some more really beautiful poems for us to enjoy.

    all the best and take care

    this time i am actually giving u 5/5...lol.lol

  • 14 years ago

    by im ur AdDiCtiOn

    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww so cute and sweet i love it its gorgus keep it up
    ~beautiful love~

  • 14 years ago

    by innocentcrybaby

    Hey princess...this was a beautiful poem...by the way you were right i am a cancer as well...and i feel the same way in this poem due to the fact that i just dumped my bf and i feel the pain for it...but it seems as if its my feelings you're writing about...great poem...

  • 14 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderful penn Princess, enjoyed!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Wow! its beautiful..........it gave a fresh feeling.....lovely poem dear!

    keep writing.......
    luv,
    Bharti

  • 14 years ago

    by Nee

    Hey dear that was amagingly written!!!!
    so heartfelt
    kepp it up

  • 14 years ago

    by Heart Locket

    Aww! I know exactly how you feel! My boyfriend isn't here by my side right now. And he probably won't be for a few months. Its agonizing! Hang in there. I hope things go well with you.

    -Brittany

  • 14 years ago

    by Dan Bloom

    You own honestly i love this poem and things will be better!!! trust me they always work themselves out ive been thru so much crap ooomg but its good now!!!! yay! lol 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by StMario

    Wonderfully expressed.... Heart touching.... leaves that thought with you..

  • 14 years ago

    by Kaitlyn

    I

  • 14 years ago

    by Kaitlyn

    Oh and plz read some of mine if u get the chance thx

  • 14 years ago

    by Cuddles

    Phew! Lengthy, huh? Only kidding!! This is so, so beautiful. I have no words to say for words cannot express how beautiful this is. It has completely blown my mind.

    hugs and love,
    Mary

  • 14 years ago

    by Ismail Rifau

    Really great

  • 14 years ago

    by CiNDY iS BAkk

    Awwwwwwwwwwwwww.............I absolutley love this poem!!!!!! It was long but to tell you the truth it was worth to read!!!!! You are a good writer NICE!!!!! 5/5

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(")

  • 14 years ago

    by Fear2love

    Perfect, speechless, keep it up

  • 14 years ago

    by Cami

    Hopefully, you read your comments so that you can get the appreciation you deserve for the talent you posses. My heart was touched. Two thumbs up as they say. I'm new to this site and I've only read two hopefully I'll get to the rest soon. Be blessed!

  • 14 years ago

    by Cami

    Excellent!

  • 14 years ago

    by Renee Kotva

    Your poem definetly put into words how I myself am feeling rite now. I love your metaphors and your style of writing. I'll be waiting to read some of your more work!

  • 14 years ago

    by dora

    Hell0 darl. this was beautifully written. a t0uching piece. great j0b!! keep it up and thank u heaps f0r the c0mment 0n my w0rk. meant al0t! =]

    l0ve fr0m
    d0ra