Boundries

by brkendown   Mar 14, 2006


Every body has boundrys and they learn where they stand but me i was the perfect one
the one who never crossed a single boundry never tryed to and when i did!
i crossed it too far!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    Hey. This is the first poem I've read of yours, and personally, it didn't strike me as poetry at all. Please don't take this personally, in any way - as I do see that it has alot of potential to be great writing... Maybe you could re-word some stuff, to put some rhythm into it. Do you know what I mean? If not I'll be glad to help in any way I can, just send an email...
    Though, now that that's said, don't think that you Have to change it. It's important that your poetry make You happy and nobody else - so it's always your call. I just thought I'd share my two cents. Good ideas though!!!