Tears from the moon

by Ben jammin   Mar 16, 2006


She's crying tears the moon gave her,
but didnt give the recipe

she was in my arms for hours,
sent her moon flowers
flowers the moon gave me,
flowers from the moon

she said thank you for the moon flowers
but i have something for you
she said its here, in my arms,
and a red dove flew into the sky

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  • 17 years ago

    by Aure

    It left me speachless,

  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Beautifully written. strong imagery and powerful right thru.

    good luck and peace
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by Christy Trenholm Schmall

    I LOVE the last stanza, I love the imagery, but the moon in the second stanza is a little repetetive. all in all though it's a good poem! keep writing Blessings

  • 18 years ago

    by Ben jammin

    Ya, what can i say, it had to be that way or it wasnt real

  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    I like this, thought maybe the moon repetition in the second stanza was a bit much, but love the last stanza.This has a surreal quality that I haven't seen much from many poets on this site and personally I have always liked.And that makes it stand out.Impressive piece.

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