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by Joy   Mar 17, 2006


People always complain
about poverty and pain
but what do they do
to change this situation?

it's easy to say
and pretend you know the way
it's easy to see others' mistakes
but won't you look at your own instead?

we can't always be in charge of other people's lives
because they have their own minds
instead we just focus ourselves
to improving what we have inside...

starting from within we can change
and who knows maybe the world will follow too

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  • 19 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    I love this poem because it so truth........NJ

  • 19 years ago

    by Mona

    I love the messege this poem holds. It's an important lessong.

    And yes I think every word you've said is right and true. And I have respect for that. There are not many people these days, who have there eyes wide open, to see the truth. But you have..

    I think it's nice written. I love the rhyming. It flows. It really does.

    Well done, keep writing, keep improving =) I can't wait to read more!!!

    Lotsaaaaaaaaa love
    -xxx-

    Ps: Thank you for your sweet email. =) We will keep in touch. Feel free to private messege me whenever you want. =)

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley

    This poem has a relly good meaning i love it.

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