All at once

by Devon   Mar 18, 2006


All at once my world seemed so perfect, with you by my side hand in hand heart in heart. I thought we had something special I thought you cared. I was wrong how could I be so foolish as to give you my heart a second time when you hurt me so badly befor. You did it again you crushed my soul.
All at once my world came crashing down. Everything I learned to believe was a lie. All my hopes and dreams shattered within two simple words. It seems impossible that two words can rip a persons heart in two but its true it did to mine.

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  • 16 years ago

    by geeeeee

    "All at once my world seemed so perfect, with you by my side hand in hand heart in heart. I thought we had something special I thought you cared."

    Just when we think things are perfect, our worlds come tumbling down and perfection is lost. Words cut deeper than what most people would think. An emotive write.

    All the best.

  • 18 years ago

    by Xox P.a.U.L.i.n.A xoX

    Great Poem :) It's sad though... Like me...
    5/5 Keep it up, take Care