All I Have To Say is Bye

by beautyinainstant   Mar 19, 2006


Was it fate?
Were we meant to be?
Now I think it was just alot of hate
Because now i truly understand that the only person i can trust is me

You were my first
I thought I loved you
And you were my worst
Stop being selfish;you can't have two

You should love me even more
Because i never made you choose
You treated me like a chore
so which one of us really did loose?

I got out fast
Just as soon as I found out
How can i put it all in the past?
At least i know what your all about

Now you have no one
How does it feel?
I have someone
You should go to the alter and Neel

Do you think I'm a piece of trash?
Do i look like some roadkill?
Well I wish you would get in a car crash
or choke on your own death pill

You should be punished
I should make you cry
At least its all finished
And all i have to say is bye

~Valerie
This was wrote for my ex bf who cheated on me...its not really as bad as it seems in this poem. me and him are friends. I would never really hope that he would die i just sort of exaggerated. *not my favorite poem* but plz vote and comment anyway!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    I have had a tough past few days so your comment really made me smile. Thank you. You write wonderfully. Your flow could probably be a little better (I'm still working on mine) but other than that you're a pretty amazing writer. Never stop.

    hugs and best wishes,
    Mary

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Wow. I'm impressed! I didn't expect it to be so good. It's well written. Loved it. Nice use of words/ and rhyming. It flows pretty well.

    I just think I few phrases might be a little bit too long, like the 4th one.

    But oh well, that's ok =) It's a nice piece of work anyway! =)

    Well done!

    Lotsaaaaaaaa love
    -xxx-

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