I can so relate to this poem... I love it. keep it up hun
-sandy-

Lovely......amazing write....
gr8 job dear! i loved ur poem....

luv,
Bharti

I liked it lots. 5/5

Great word choice. Captured my intention and gave me agreat mental visual. I suggest breaking it up a bit, though

I LOVE poesm that mention clock wathcing and generally rhis poem was greta
You are talented :)

Omg, i feel this right now, i love the poem 5/5

This is really sad and beautiful all at one time, so much emotions in it. great poem.
i really really liked these lines

Harsh words spoken about another
So why stop now, we hate each other

Hey...it was written really well. and it sounds good.

Awe thats so sad, But also so perfect! I felt like you were inside my head painting the perfect picture of all my emotions spilled all together into flowing words! Loved it 5/5

Wow - amazing poem! I loved the rhyme, and the last few lines bring it all together neatly. It's well put together, and wouldn't flow as well if there were stanzas . . .Excellent work :)

Peace. [Sole]

This is so sweet i really liked it it almost made me cry!
i liked so many of the lines but espically...
Screaming out your name with no reply
and
Tears of regret with blood shot eyes
but yeah exellent 5/5 xx ALLY xx

This is so sweet i really liked it it almost made me cry!
i liked so many of the lines but espically...
Screaming out your name with no reply
and
Tears of regret with blood shot eyes
but yeah exellent 5/5 xx ALLY xx

This one is so sad poem.
"But after all that we have been through
Just remember, I'll always love you." i loved those lines.

Wow, Beautifully written, Has an awesome Flow. If you seperate the poem a little it will give it more structure. other than that superb.

~Joe~

This is a very sad love poem. I can feel your pain and so very much relate to it. It was a great poem, you have much potential. Good job, and know that sometimes you have to let those you love go. For your own good, and for theirs.

-Artimis-

That made me cry. No lie. I guess that is because I know how you feel. Well...Sort of.

"You've moved on, so why can't I
Screaming out your name with no reply"

And I know that feeling. It hurts so bad. And sometimes you get so confused and lost and you don't know what to do or where to turn.

This is a great poem Bridgette. Keep it up. ;)

Because I let you go without a fight
Tears of regret with blood shot eyes

Those lines really caught my eye. This is such a good poem! The feeling was so strong in it I can't even describe! 5/5 for sure!

Good poem, i enjoyed it. ive read a few others also, thank you for your comments! a may not leave as many comments, but if i do i try to make them constructive. nice lil rhyme scheme here. :-p

Aw, this is really good too. knowing that you will always love someone when you know they don't sucks major huh? ur writing is really good though. i love it a lot

Really powerfull, starts to loose momentum twards the end, all in all, i really liked it, great work!