Im fine

by NIKKI   Mar 20, 2006


Her talking to him:
\"i swear im okay
what else do i have to say
im totally fine
and thats not just a line
you can leave me
its okay to let me be
i swear on mi life
ill live long enough to be your wife
so leave, good bye
and stop with the sigh
dont pout
and close the door on your way out\"

Her to self:
\"ok, finally im by myself
now where did i put it on mi shelf?
that razor is so hard to find
especally in this state of mind
so thin and sharp
covered in semi flesh blood like a tarp
im feeling so low
where did that razor go?\"

him to self:
\"she accually thought id leave her by herself
like i didnt know that razor was on her shelf
her stopping is so hard to beleive
to bad she made me leave
now she will never find her preciouse razor
i hope she knows im doing her a favor

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  • 18 years ago

    by Something has a hold of me

    I really like this poem. I have been reading some of your poems and i like all the ones that i have read so far.

  • Wow i loved it!!!!
    you really dun sumthin
    different and it worked out
    awsome!!!! 5/5 definently

  • 18 years ago

    by Spitfire

    Omg
    i love that
    its really good
    greatjob
    it really diffrent
    ive never seen a poem like that before
    grea job agina
    definitaly
    5/5