Comments : For Love or Duty

  • 14 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    It made all the sense. very transparent . i really enjoed going through each line. great job
    all the best
    just wishes

  • 14 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Lovely......beautiful.......good job!
    effective one....5/5

    luv,
    Bharti

  • 14 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This life has taught me a very important lesson
    In the line of duty and love
    Duty wins and love stays unknown

    what to say on this, seems u hv really been so close to the darker side of love but then many people have.....still i can bet they dont hv the art to put it on paper so beautifully as u did here. u r simply the best

    Thousand deaths that I have died in my life
    Once more I would wish to die
    With the hope to reborn for your love
    In your arms I will live my next life

    as i commented earlier too, after reading ur poems and knowing ur wishes...i feel as if its my words and my desires u r talking abt..trust me..i can feel everything u r talking abt here and i just love ur poems.

    all the best and take care

  • 14 years ago

    by David

    You know what..... that was something else! that poem was wonderful.. I could so relate to what you where saying... well done... 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wow, what a write, great job Michelle!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by cLumsy

    A wonderfully tragic masterpiece. definetely a work of art that uses every word to entrance the most thoughtful readers. you my friend, are one of the best.

  • 14 years ago

    by obsessedgurl

    I especially liked the rhymes that you chose!! Excellent overall!

  • 14 years ago

    by Cuddles

    Au contraire, Princess, it makes perfect sense. When you let your feelings out, you really let them out, huh? Beautiful! I love the 5th and 6th stanza and the last one is just so perfect. Excellent job on this!!

  • 14 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Can see how much this has touched readers before me. lovely, sad and yet beautifully written.

    hope you are feeling okay.
    love and peace
    shobhana

  • 14 years ago

    by Always4You

    He lives in the shadow of her hair
    He breathes through the pores of her skin
    It is for her that he curves all his paths
    Giving all that he can from deep within

    That was my favorite part! That was GREAT! Keep it up! Could you comment on my newest poem "Just A Breath"? It would be highly appreciated!

    ~Always4You~

  • 14 years ago

    by Michelle

    I really like that, I can totally relate. I hope that is not true because I know how bad it hurts. Hope everything's all right!
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  • 14 years ago

    by April

    Great poem. i liked it. it was sad but so true. good job!

  • 14 years ago

    by April

    Great poem. i liked it. it was sad but so true. good job!

  • 14 years ago

    by April

    Great poem. i liked it. it was sad but so true. good job!

  • 14 years ago

    by April

    Great poem. i liked it. it was sad but so true. good job!

  • 14 years ago

    by April

    Great poem. i liked it. it was sad but so true. good job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Brian

    I really enjoyed this poem and as others have pointed out, I too can relate...

    great job

  • 14 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Who among us has not learned the fool's lesson...
    never, of course, to be repeated!
    A fine delivery of a well-known dilemma....

    p.s. I think,perhaps, you may have meant......
    ... to be reborn.....near the ending

    Ah.....reincarnation......Ah...... karma......Ah......

  • 14 years ago

    by katy

    X.xx
    hey u left a comment on one of my poems..so i thought i would read some of urs...and i love it, i really do..reminds me of how i had felt once..amazing..xx.X