This life has taught me a very important lesson
In the line of duty and love
Duty wins and love stays unknown
what to say on this, seems u hv really been so close to the darker side of love but then many people have.....still i can bet they dont hv the art to put it on paper so beautifully as u did here. u r simply the best
Thousand deaths that I have died in my life
Once more I would wish to die
With the hope to reborn for your love
In your arms I will live my next life
as i commented earlier too, after reading ur poems and knowing ur wishes...i feel as if its my words and my desires u r talking abt..trust me..i can feel everything u r talking abt here and i just love ur poems.
Au contraire, Princess, it makes perfect sense. When you let your feelings out, you really let them out, huh? Beautiful! I love the 5th and 6th stanza and the last one is just so perfect. Excellent job on this!!
14 years ago
by shobhana kumar
Can see how much this has touched readers before me. lovely, sad and yet beautifully written.
hope you are feeling okay.
love and peace