by Tom Swart Mar 21, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
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The murmur of my brook is no longer speaking |
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Hey Tom This poem was lovely, your use of metaphors was excellent,the poem itself had good flow and was filled with emotion |
by Jenni Marie
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This was simply beautiful. |
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It was my pleasure to read you ... |
by Cindy
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You have amazing talent Tom. I am just drawn into your poems. Feeling so much akin to them. Wonderful. The words, the form. Everything about them. Your talent astounds me. 5/5 |
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Tom, the words are powerful and the emotion is deep in this write. A beautiful write. |