Comments : A Lonely Moon

  • 14 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Nicely done Michelle, lonliness is a dishearterning cross to bare, but may beauty within you find likewise beauty and conpanionship, and may your heart, soul, and every exisitance be blessed with happiness and love!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by David

    What a beautfiul first line! I really loved this poem.. i think you are a really talented poet! well done x

  • 14 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I felt this was a very god poem. the writing style inparticularly intrigued me, but i also like the message behind the creative wording. well done, not that you need my acceptance

    Brad

    P.S. thanks for voting and commenting on my poem 'One Single Breath', as all votes and comments are always appreciated.

  • 14 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is certainly the best poem in this complete site and the best poem i have read in all my life...this is just so meaningful and u don't know what every word here means for me.

    So sad and so true as this all lives in me.

    Ultimate piece of work here.

    All the best and take care
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by EmptyEyes

    Wow. this is great. this one shot through me... i love this one.

  • 14 years ago

    by StMario

    Greatly expressed..... a person never fails if they really tries to succeed. Keep on moving forward.... will read the rest....

  • 14 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl a t0uching piece. g0od use 0f w0rds.

  • 14 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Great! i never thought of the moon this way - it is so beautiful how you have brought out a side that is most often never imagined!

    lovely.

    love and peace
    shobhana

    do hope you are okay Michelle. take care.

  • 14 years ago

    by Renee Kotva

    And again your poem has touched me you describe so well its like your actually there and feeling the same thing. Very well written deserves a five.

  • 14 years ago

    by Heather

    I really like this cause it is really depressing and, well, I like depressing stuff! Well done!

  • 14 years ago

    by Kurt

    Wow. That was a great poem. Such emotion and feeling. The wording was perfect the flow impeccable. It was truly a joy to read. Congrats. This poem definately deserves to be in the top section!

  • 14 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    The part of you that is not lonely is the part that united with your own creative Spirit to produce poetry from pain...a fine pairing...Blessings on your willingness...and, on this touching poetic 'child' of your Love...

  • 14 years ago

    by Kiara

    Very beauitful. I love the part were you write " guarded by countless stars he stands alone" I love anything that has to with the night time and the night creatures that roam in the night and I really love the moon.

  • 14 years ago

    by Nee

    Oh wow wut a touching piece!!!
    i totally luved it. it amazed me!!
    keep it up
    good luck
    xxxxx

  • 14 years ago

    by Cuddles

    This reminds me of a song I heard once-same concept. I love the theme, and the poem is simply too incredible for words. Excellent job!

  • 14 years ago

    by EmptyEyes

    Haha, yes. I still have to wait 1 more year till i'm legal... and sorry for replying a comment here...heh...

  • 14 years ago

    by simply taylor

    Once again you leave me amazed. i can really really relate to this one. and i really really liked it too.
    5/5.
    .me.

  • 14 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    This poem was awesome, i loved it
    thanks for commenting on my poem "Impulse", I have a new one if you have time to read/rate/comment it
    -Stay strong, and keep your words truely spoken

  • 14 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    The imagery was excellent. And the words easily portrayed the lonliness aspect quite well along with the metaphor/personification of the moon. Nicely done with all of it. Really this had been a cool write because it was beautiful and just...really an excellent concept.
    ~Faith-less