Nicely done Michelle, lonliness is a dishearterning cross to bare, but may beauty within you find likewise beauty and conpanionship, and may your heart, soul, and every exisitance be blessed with happiness and love!!!
The part of you that is not lonely is the part that united with your own creative Spirit to produce poetry from pain...a fine pairing...Blessings on your willingness...and, on this touching poetic 'child' of your Love...
Very beauitful. I love the part were you write " guarded by countless stars he stands alone" I love anything that has to with the night time and the night creatures that roam in the night and I really love the moon.
The imagery was excellent. And the words easily portrayed the lonliness aspect quite well along with the metaphor/personification of the moon. Nicely done with all of it. Really this had been a cool write because it was beautiful and just...really an excellent concept.