So lost

by ren   Mar 24, 2006


Drifting out further
into this ocean.
No set destination.

Will i be saved?
Screaming out for help
but no one hears.

Wishing for a guiding light
to show me the way.
Getting more and more lost.

Waves crash and pull me under.
In over my head and sinking.
One single hand grasping for help.

Inhale a breath full of salty water.
The darkness is closing in around me.
Forever waiting for that one helping hand

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