Winding winds,wind,lines

by mike   Mar 25, 2006


A burst of wind sweeps across,the lake with a snap like a whip,bending fishing poles and twisting lines,fishermen scurry to untangle
Gordian knots, poles weaving under and over,in one loop and out the other, a continues knitting pattern, netting more knotting,instead of unknotting, unwinding and winding while wind winds through pines, fishermen whine and pine over lost lines

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  • 17 years ago

    by mike

    Man your work just haunts me its so out there man you are the best att this i had to study this for hours before i could understand its puns.

  • 18 years ago

    by Micky

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  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Umm..2 tell u the truth i didnt even understand this poem sorry..its like w/e i guess..

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  • 18 years ago

    by Mickyelle

    Great