I love this. its so sad. keep it up! 5/5

This is great really sweet. i know how you feel this was well expressed and flowed well, i felt like it could have lasted longer but a great poem all the sam e!!!!!!
ALLY xx

Great job keep up the great work 5/5

It flowed really well and the words were good, maybe just scratched the surface as you could have used imagery to help make them deeper. But still a beautiful poem. The words were good enough for the reader to imagine their own scenerio and how it might have been.

A t0uching piece l0t 0f em0ti0n in this thank u f0r the c0ment 0n my w0rk. meant al0t =]

l0ve fr0m
d0ra

This is such a sad poem... but i can relate to it so much... take care and keep up the good work

Love
Jacs
xxx

Good poem. I almost got sad by reading it. very good.
5/5..

Very emotionl poem. The concept is sad. I like how you didnt go into explaining everything you just said what you felt and it meant a lot I loved that ;)It goes to show you dont need 20 stanzas to get your point across and you still have a wonderful poem. It was very general and I like that, other people could relate ;) Great write =)

--emotionless.19*

Beautiful & deep
loved it
5/5
love
amy
pls check murder or suicdie

Just to have someone presence can mean the world at the worst of times....this was easy for me to relate to..tender on the tongue...pleasing to the heart...fanstastic!

[lostlaureate - come find me]

This is really pretty, and so emotional. you are very talented. i love how the last line sums up the poem...very effective

This was a good short poem.

This poem sounds really desparate. But I understand what you're saying. It makes me sad...Good work.

I rili liked the poem, the emotion you gave across was great, i especially liked,

"I know your with her now
Because that image haunts my mind"

very expressive! great write, jes x

I've been through this feeling before. Only problem was that the guy was really sad about his decision and wanted everyone around him to feel his pain. It had been best for me just to let him go in the end. Good poem!

-Artimis-

Very nice sounds like my life

Short, but sweet