Your depression

by Andrea broken tears   Mar 26, 2006


You tell me you want to end your life,
take it with a knife.
Lonely and sad
it almost drives you mad.
But I'll end the pain
because you will gain
happiness not sweet suicide
bliss.
I try to change your mind
but I'm running out of time.
You want to run away
run to a high dark place.
But you need to be strong
you have to go on.
People need you
to help them through.

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  • 18 years ago

    by alive in death

    I wish i had someone that would tell me this..... i can tell already that you could be a really awesom from to people... you really care enough to write about the things that people think are insignificant, but really needed to be paid attention too.....

    thank you for saying the unconfortable in your art...(this is what i consider to be art btw, poetry is always that way to me)

    your writing touches me as i'm sure it does many other poeple...
    excellent work my friend, 5/5
    phil

  • 18 years ago

    by Robyn

    This is a great poem great job :)
    xoxo robyn

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Me

    Ur so sweet... ur a really good friend to stick by a friend when they need u most... sometimes it's the deciding factor. Whose it about? Oh thanks for writing more poems lol!

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