Within Me

by Laura Ash   Mar 27, 2006


There is a girl that you can't see
The one that doesn't know who she could be
This girl inside is hiding from everything
This girl can't feel anything
So much pain has held her numb
And death keeps telling her to come
She ignores it with all her might
She walks miles until she sees the light
She runs from the blade
Trying to let the tears fade
Sitting, waiting, listening to the rain
Why it's happening this girl can't explain
She looks in the mirror and watches her tears
She turns off the light and faces her fears
She keeps working so she can be strong
She won't let this disaster last very long
This girl will fix every sin
This girl is me within

Written on March 26, 2006

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  • 18 years ago

    by Raven

    LOVED IT !!!!!!
    You did really good on this poem

    ~Mz.Raven

  • 18 years ago

    by Nikki

    Wow - a very powerful, engaging poem! The last two lines are simple yet effective.

  • 19 years ago

    by jamie ellen

    Very well done the emotion was very blatant

  • 19 years ago

    by BrokenToy

    Great poem. I love the whole feel of it and all the emotions put into it. I know from experience how hard it is to write about that kind of pain and it's not easy getting the point forth without it sounding a little clique.. This poem, I think, is pure emotions and no clique at all. Love it.

    *BrokenToy

  • 19 years ago

    by LiL K

    Wow, this poem is amazing...I can't believe you're only 13. You have awesome talent to be that young! I'm definately adding you to my favs...and thanks for your comment on my poem btw!

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