That's really good. I really like that lot. I know exactly what that feels like. It's such a sad thing to experience. Great Job!

Hey...i luv ur poem its really good..its just like my life except im a grl and im 14 but all the rest is excatly how i am and my life is.....

Hey Gurlie! Dang that was good! You rock!!!!!!! that's awsome! u really get into it deep.... GREAT JOB!!!

Child abuse is a heartbreaking thing to experience, watch, and hear about. but its even more heartwrenching to write it down on paper...only because of the many emotions that are tied into it.
so i congratulate u on doing it so wonderfully.
this was a beautiful piece, for being about such a sad subject.
please keep writing and stay safe, strong, and healthy!
AntiSocial16
ps: thank you soo much for the comment on my "Sister to Sister" poem. it meant a lot to me!

Aw this poem is so sad. great job on it. 5/5*

Ooh...certainly made me sit up a think...watch out for a few typos on words like "thosse" but apart from that its ace!

[lostlaureate - come find me]

Very cute poem ur an amazing poet this made a tear come to my eyes... very touching

Very nice. i love the end. amazing.

This was really good. Yet so so so sad. You used great POV aswell. Which was good 5/5
luv natalie x0x

-gasp-
AHHHH!
SOOOOOOOOOO incredibly sad. akj;fdka;fda
Really. Reading about something like that is almost too horrible to imagine...and even though I dont want to, I'm kinda glad you shared this poem.

Spectacular! xoxo

All he hears is "your not good enough"
and "why are you here"
thosse are the times he prays
he could just disappear

i love that and i can relate to it. good work keep it up 5/5
Pip
xxx

All I've ever heard from you is superb work, and this is no different. You are a true poet

Omg soo good but then soo sad at the exact same time. Are all of your poems about boys/men? keep it up
Ashlick(ashley)

"Thats the night
that god took him for his own
He'd never feel anymore pain
He'd always be with him sitting beside the golden throne.. "
i liked this stanza the best it shows how he lost all hs pain i loved this poem.

First off slight typo in 5th stanza.

really don't know what to say about this peice, really welll written, a little too strong really, but that will just be me proabally. cant think what to say about this really. great peice though

Your very talented at poem writing... this poem was amazing very sad.... love louise xx

You constanly make me tear up, but it's cuz their soo good.

The emotions of the people you write about come right through, the page. I adore ur poetry.

Wow...that was really touching...great emotions...nice job...
Emma 5/5

This poem is so sad...I love the story, it's beautiful. 5/5

Well written and very touching... A great job, keep it up