Comments : This Lie Called "Love"

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    Your poems are so simple, yet SO complex. It's like you take what we all think about and put it into perfectly perfect Dr. Suess rhymes. What's the deal? WHERE DO YOUR IDEAS COME FROM? lol! Love it! 5/5!
    Kristen

  • 18 years ago

    by Scott Sturgeon

    Love it...Kinda know how she feels.....
    we all have our heart broke..some worse then others...Keep up the great work..

  • Diiz is such a good poem and iit kiinda goes for me and my ex....thatz how iit was with us and we never got over iit so yeah...we ended iit a whiile bak...love diz one

  • 18 years ago

    by Luke

    Such a touching poem, Of deceit, It shows a very good image, and really gets the point across.
    Well done, a very good poem.

  • This was awesome i loved it! i really did i love all your poems! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Macy

    Wow this was amazing. i loved it so much. you are a very talented writer and i love basically everything you write!

  • 18 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Omg you know i loved it so much girl what i wonderful poem i have been missing you girl i just cant seem to write like i use too but i will try but keep on write some more i love to put them on my wall so my friends can see my favorite poet!!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tisha

    Another Masterpiece!!!
    Tisha~

  • 18 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Hey there tiny!! *grins* long time no speak my love. what can I say. you always blow me away! beautiful theme beautiful writing beautiful rhyming. I love your poetry!! :D *hugs* i hope we catch up soon!!
    xoxo Ruthie

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    How I wish I had your talent! Your poems are so amazing. You take life and put it into the simple words that our complex minds can't come up with. Magnificently superb!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    ...woow.... this is absolutely amazing!!! stunning write. keep it up!
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by julia

    This poem is like the best ive heard on this site all day

  • 18 years ago

    by julia

    This poem is like so complex so many people can realate to it its probably the best one ive read on this site all day!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Wow, this is really a brilliant poem indeed, very nicely penned. I am a husband and i can totally understand the man's situation here...lol (just kidding)

    lovely poem indeed, u really xpressed the emotions of a women so deeply here.

    all the best and take care

  • 18 years ago

    by just a poet

    Wow, im breathless, u r an astounding poet, this poem is super and i really think u have the talent and i cans ee u use it. its superb. so simply written yet with a complex underlying message. loved therhyming too. a defenite 5. take care.

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ Dark Princess ღ

    Awesome poem. So related to me. Loved it. 5.5

    D_P

  • 18 years ago

    by princess_neo

    Wow, nice poem... im not marreid, but i do have a bf.. i know how that feels. ne ways, brownie points 4 u. u are a wonderful poet. :) 5/5. keep up the great work.

  • 18 years ago

    by heretostay

    WOW FANTASTIC POEM! I LOVED IT!! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by creeesta

    Can you ever not write a good poem! LoL... you are soooo good!

  • 18 years ago

    by Edina

    You are amazing!
    that was great poem 5/5