Let Me Go

by CarissalRADIOFACEl   Apr 1, 2006


It took seeing me happy
to realize your mistake
and watching me smile
was all you could take

One heart too real,
another, too fake
You seemed so strong
yet you were so easy to break

There I stood, in the open
with my heart stitched to my sleeve
Just someone to love me
was all I would need

But I'd asked for too much
so you took it away
There was no more trying
No will and no way

All of the small things,
we forgot, so uncaring
And for all of the big things
we weren't very daring

We just passed them up
and left our hearts in the middle
We never cared
and we were both so belittled

So here we are
biting our tongues
to keep from saying words
we let out when we were young

I don't think I can forgive you...
I want you to know...
When you start to miss me
just remember... you let me go...

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  • 18 years ago

    by CarissalRADIOFACEl

    Damn... forgot to add my name to the end... -Carissa-*

  • 18 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Wonderful write. Very "in your face", which is sometimes hard to pull off in a love poem. 5/5
    As always~ Kate

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    So well written... especially the last stanza... really rounds it up

    loved it well done and keep up the hard work!!!

    Jacs
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by creeesta

    I LOVE this poem!!!! I love it, I love it, I love it!!!!! 5/5

    You are VERY TALENTED!!!!!
    Keep it up!!! :)

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